Comments on: Story Update: Never Be Lost, Chapter 1 http://asinamirror.com/story-update-never-be-lost-chapter-1/ Just another WordPress site Sun, 27 Nov 2011 23:36:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v= By: Miss Szymanski http://asinamirror.com/story-update-never-be-lost-chapter-1/#comment-158 Miss Szymanski Mon, 28 Dec 2009 02:56:28 +0000 http://asinamirror.com/?p=405#comment-158 Dido to what Jay said! Your story is very interesting so far, and I can't wait to read the rest. Good job! Dido to what Jay said! Your story is very interesting so far, and I can’t wait to read the rest. Good job!

]]> By: Jay http://asinamirror.com/story-update-never-be-lost-chapter-1/#comment-157 Jay Sun, 27 Dec 2009 00:20:39 +0000 http://asinamirror.com/?p=405#comment-157 Alice, that's wonderful! If there's anyone that could write a story about missionaries, it is you! I don't think you took too long in the introduction; I love introductions like that. In my opinion, it gets you to feel like you know that character. I CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE!! Love your writing, love the plot, and I love the missionaries part of it, too. BTW, I think you came up with some great names! :D Alice, that’s wonderful! If there’s anyone that could write a story about missionaries, it is you! I don’t think you took too long in the introduction; I love introductions like that. In my opinion, it gets you to feel like you know that character.

I CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE!! Love your writing, love the plot, and I love the missionaries part of it, too. BTW, I think you came up with some great names! :D

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