Comments on: Story Update: Never Be Lost, Chapter 3

By: The Other Alice

The Other Alice — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 20:33:02 +0000

Wow, guys. I am thrilled that you really like it so much. Your comments made me laugh out loud! I really will try to get the next part together some time soon. And I am equally excited to see everyone else’s updates!

By: Jay

Jay — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 04:25:36 +0000

Alice, I get the chills when reading your stories! It really is a edge-of-the-seat kind of story. I just can’t wait to read more! (In fact, I’m gonna save all of these, so I can read it straight through when I’m done.) Well, make sure you don’t take too long to post your next part, because this is too intriguing. I have to admit that I’ve learned more about missionaries in S. America by reading your story than I ever have before! Keep up the EXCELLENT, awesome work!

By: Miss Szymanski

Miss Szymanski — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 02:50:02 +0000

That’s a great story you’ve got there, Alice! I laughed out loud when Ben took great interest in the ceiling and started whistling. You’ve totally got my imagination swimming! Can’t wait to hear more… Great job!

By: Brickster

Brickster — Mon, 18 Jan 2010 00:46:14 +0000

I really like it! And I really like the parts where Alex says the thing about day-quil, and when ben comments about the poster and the… um.. “surgical” tool. I can’t wait to read the rest, though!